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for Apprentice

by RyuaAlba

person Meep326
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, damn, not quite what I was expecting as an ending. But I loved it, nice use of real emotions and whatnot, rather than just the same canned endings and all that. It'd be great if you continued on with this fic, does a service to everyone that good doesn't always win, and the path of evils so much easier.
person Min-chan
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So... I haven't read such a good OC fic for a long time. ^^ If you please, could you write another chapter? Or something... Since it's really hard to find fics like this. I mean, fics that contain Sith winning over Jedi and so. I would really appreciate that, if you find time and bother to write. ^^'
person Muggleman(offline)
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story keep it up
person Winterflame.
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was well-written and realistic, even if the ending wasn't quite to my taste. Well done.

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