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Hey, thanks stipje for pointing out the rather drastic lack of continuity, many apologies. I have corrected it, there are a few extra small paragraphs on the end of Chapter 17 explaining the whole mug and herb thing (it didn't upload them the last time stupid internet!) I also realised that my not-so-darling sister has changed the file names on my computer meaning I posted the draft for Chapter 18 and not the real thing. Okay so there wasn't much difference in them but some of it's changed making it flow a bit better.

In answer to what's Oria planning the answer is...

Well you'll just have to keep reading to find out won't you ;D lol

All will become clear in a few chapters my darlings

Phew... Spent the last week catching up on all your writing!
Bloody brilliant... Gotta love that imagination of yours!
Good thing you're updating quite regularly, I'm not known for my patience ;)
Don't entirely understand yet what Oria's getting at, at the moment...

Wow, I missed quite a lot of action over the last few days!!

Poor Sarah, I didn't expect that at all.

Can't wait to see how this all pans out!

Great updates!

Da-da-daaaaaa!!

I love a good cliffhanger!!!

You busted me out! I'm supposed to be cleaning house like a madwoman for company tomorrow. Shhh...don't tell anyone!

It is rather lonely being the only reviewer here.

*grabs random reader* You there, get to reviewing or I'll keelhaul the lot of you!

Wow, this is a really great story. I really like the way it's turning out, you're doing a bang-up job!

Keep up the good work!

So HOT!!

Excellent work!! Worth every effort!!

More please!!