rate_review Reviews

I thought the man that wrapped his coat around Oria was Jack. But now I know for sure. Awe, it's sooo sweet. I knew he couldn't leave without her. He's got it bad!!! lol So the heart will only save one?! Too bad!! Now that Jack is aware of her situation and duty obligations to Davey, he will be more careful and perhaps find a way to save them both??? He is the sly and clever one you know. Well at least I can only hope things turn out with a happy ending. But in the mean time more intersting twist and turns to come. Keep them coming!!!

Thanks for posting two chapters, chapter 21 and 22. They were great. I wonder how the Commodore will free himself from the tree and how he is going to handle the new knowledge of our dear Oria's healing powers. I felt so sad for Jack when Oria said it was all just an 'Act.' Poor Jack. He loves Oria just as she does him. Love is blind. But like Jack said Oria cannot be trusted...I'm curious as to how Oria knew Jack would seek refuge with that particular whore??? I wonder what Jack is going to do now. This was very hard for Jack having to dismiss Oria from her duty, but completely understandable. Some unanswered questions finally answered and I cannot wait for chapter 23 to find out more. Hopefully more questions will be answered in the next posting. :)

Yay two more chapters...I love it when you don't have to wait months for an update. The story stays fresh in your head and the anticipation is satisfied. Please keep them coming regulary and your readers will be very happy!!! I loved chapter 19 and 20. It is sooo obvious that Oria and Jack love each other but with the circumstances bestowed upon Oria it makes a relationship impossible. It's soo sad. Oria deserves to be happy. She's suffered so much in her life...But I know Oria has a plan and I cannot wait to find out just what she has in store for Davey and our beloved Jack. She has been so clever up to this point and I know it is just the beginning. Please post soon. *hoping*

Never mind, I got the chapters kinda mixed up
(the one with the added paragraphs) ;)

Okay... She's going to trick Jack and Davey.
What on earth does she want?

Chapter 23 you say? *bounces in anticipation*
Jack's a fool... How can he not see she loves him?
She can't even look him in the eyes and tell him.

Thanks, I'll go back and read those extra paragraphs =)

You've already written some of the next chapter, haven't you?
(or have you already written the whole thang?)

Either way, post some more! I wanna know what Oria is up to...

Chapter 18, it is... =p

Wow, you were busy writing your little heart out while I was off goofing around!

This story is becoming rather heart wrenching and I love it!!

Keep up the good work!


*waves to other reviewers* Hi, glad to see I'm no longer alone!

I've just finished reading your Oria's series from Oria's Tale to Twisted Views. I must say I couldn't stop reading it. It is a very enjoyable story to read and I cannot wait to read more about Jack and Oria. Oria's character and situation is original and refreshing and because of Oria's family history her character is believable. I know she is pure evil but I've become attached to her and have been rooting for her to kick some ass!! Now current chapter 18 review. I really felt sorry for Oria when Jack strayed...Also loved how she handled things with the doctors medicine. Very clever...I am very curious to see just how they are going to work things out. Bad Jack!!! Please update soon and I will review....I'm definately hooked and keep the chapters coming!!!

Anytime luv, if only internet would've let me done it sooner =p
AnaMaria, hm? Bloody bastard, can't last two weeks...





(Just so you know, I'm a crappy reviewer, so most of my comments will
be directed at the content of the chapter ;) )

Ha! Okidoki then =D

*slightly confused* When did she put the herbs in AnaMaria's mug?
Guess she's jealeous, hm?
What's her reply to Jack gonna be?
I still haven't figured out what her true motives are...