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I love it! I love it I love it I love it! The tension between Elizabeth and Will, and then a whole different kind of tension between Elizabeth and Jack, it keeps me on the edge of every word wanting to know what happens next, almost praying for the resolution. ^-^ Talented writers, you are.

hey girls! you're doing a good job!

if you want to add some french in the next chapters, you can ask me to translate...it's my mother tongue.

615 hits so far... YOU ARE ON A ROLE!!!!! tehe... a great story full of everything and more...

The tired Bosnian

My two fave authors combined! I love it!

My, oh my! Aren't yall being a little too mean to Will? I mean, come on, you steal his clothes and THEN Elizabeth completely tells him off, and NOW Lizzie's LEAVING him, and he has no clue! ... and being me, I have to mention that in either ch. 3 or 4, you have their, where you should have they're. The plot is beautiful, it's keeping me interested (which, believe it or not, is hard to do.) Anywho, I love this story so far, but I have but one request: LAY OFF OF WILL!!! The poor man can only take so much before he starts giving back, you know? And he's such a nice fellow!!! Why the abuse? *cries* Why?

Wow. I really want to know what happens next! I mean, it's completely mind boggling. Jack....and then Lizzie even thinking about becoming a boring housewife, and Will's sudden drop in IQ... It makes me feel as if everything could end with one decision, or begin with another and I PRAYING that she picks the right one. Someone put me out of my misery! UPDATE SOON!

this is such a good story idea! and so far i'm hooked, so PLEASE GIVE US MORE!!!!!! can't wait for the next chappy ^_^