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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is awesome and you are doing a great job of developing your characters. Too many stories jump right in, but this is very good and interesting because it has depth. I hope that you will update very soon!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
From the beginning I liked this story. You have a gift when it comes to weaving little things we all can appreciate to make the story hold.
Excellent job.
-Cam
Excellent job.
-Cam
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slight cliffy!?? There's no slight about it. :) I have greatly enjoyed the story so far and would love to read some more.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. I will be on the look out for more.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OO, OO, OO. OOOOOOO! I really like where this is going. I can't wait to see more. =)
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like Mya and Tor'ac(spelling). I thinkyou should continue if you want my two cents worth. :)
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More if you please
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your cliffie and I hope Tor'ac takes Mya with him, even if it is just for a trip "around" the world and back (but I hope there's much more than that).
I love the way you explained the interesting occurances. I think a Yautja would find a human house so puzzling to say the least.
I'm glad she didn't try to explain her PMS. LOL that would be something I don't think I'd like to have to explain to a 7ft tall male alien.
I love the way you explained the interesting occurances. I think a Yautja would find a human house so puzzling to say the least.
I'm glad she didn't try to explain her PMS. LOL that would be something I don't think I'd like to have to explain to a 7ft tall male alien.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
Wolfthenskae@aol.com
Wolfthenskae@aol.com
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
Wolfthenskae@aol.com
Wolfthenskae@aol.com