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Hi Draylon,

Thank you so very much for your compliments, :-)

I just came up with the title off the top of my head hehehe

Thanks again :-)

Apologies, since I feel compelled to write a review although I have not actually read this story yet (based on the other one though, I'm sure it'll be grand). But I needed to comment....this has to be the best title for a story about oral sex and pirates ever. Brilliant.

Thanks for your compliment.

I wrote the story for a woman whose name is Donna. My name is Lori.

She saw my Nip/Tuck fan fiction that I have posted here on the TV shows fan fic site thread.

She loved my style of writing so she asked me if I would write Pirates of the Caribbean fan fiction for her and include her in it. She loves Johnny Depp.

I love Johnny Depp from his 21 Jump Street days, many years ago. Of course, I loved him in Pirates also. I actually enjoyed Dead Man's Chest better than the original.

Heh heh I had originally posted my fanfiction on another website where I had to bleet out certain words. LOL I forgot to post dick and cock, etc words written out in full before I posted here. hee hee

Hmmm. Just some constructive criticism. Savvy balls? C***. You're story has the appropriate rating, don't be ashamed to type out cock.

If you're going to have a one-shot make sure to add detail. Lots and lots of sexual detail.

Great spelling and grammar though.