rate_review Reviews

You just can't stop here. The Story screams for a sequel! Please continue!

hmm...this is a good start but i think jack is kind of out of character and also, um...jack got lizzie pregnant right...and now that lizzie just lost her baby they're backto having lots of sex all night? I just find that a bit unrealisitic and that jack has already forgotten the possibilty of getting lizzie pregnant again. However your plot seems to be developing and a good start. keep up the good work. xx

So far so good. I say write lots more! *P*L*H*

Im enjoying this story, please write more soon!! :-)