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by minniemay

person kookookitty
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't usually read it if someone other than sarah goes into the labyrinth as most are thinly concealed mary sue's. this story however is different; the mythology and legend, you have obviously researched. i like the personality of lexy, not a sarah clone but there is some of sarah in your portrayal of her and much more. i like that you have written the female characters as strong and intelligent, self assured and independent.

this is a captivating story that is eloquently written. i am looking forward to reading more of this engaging piece.

thank you,
ginny
person krista
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! way to go am! keep posting and sure enough maybe you'll finish this one!
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another one please!! I like how strong she is!
person Maggie
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you totally have to keep up with its good. I await the next chaper with baited breath.
person Draco
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but just to let you know Sarah is with a H at end not Sara. Other then that keep up the good work

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