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I think this story is positively wonderful so far, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

I registered for an account solely to leave a review for this story. You have an amazing talent for story telling and this has been an exceptional pleasure to read! I love your characterization, Jareth is wonderful (honestly, one of the best representations I have read), spoiled, sneering, sexy. Just great. Can't wait for more!

Another wonderful Chapter! My, Sarah has such a iron will. I'm wondering how in all names did she get out of sight so fast before he noticed where she went. Can't wait for the next chapter when ever that might be.

YES! You would not believe how happy I was to see that you updated. And a wonderful update it is! I've fallen back in love with this story.

Fantastic! I just opened this on a whim and imagine my surprise, you updated! Fantastically hot and riveting--you'll forgive me if I hope the next chapter comes a little sooner than this one did. :D

I love this story--it's, by far, my favorite Labyrinth story of all time. I'm absolutely delighted to find that it's not dead.

yay you update it was a really enjoyable chapter normally i review under gypsyreapers name but i recalled my login name yay so please update as soon as the muse hits u agian because im incrediably addicted to this story ive gotten several friends addicted to it as well so please update as soon as u get another chapter done thank you INNER FANGIRL YELLS I LOVE UR WRITING

I am only on Chapter 10, but I know from experience what it is like to see from the count that people are reading your story, but are not leaving feedback. That being the case, I'll leave you a review now and another when I get to the most recent addition.

I am SO enjoying your story. It is everything I love about excellent fanfic - complex, original, courageous, enticing - and manages to avoid all the pitfalls of poor fic - Mary-Sue'ing, porn without plot, etc. You are obviously a gifted writer and are fortunate enough to possess a vivid, colourful imagination. You have captured both Sarah and Jareth's voices very well, while at the same time making your OCs seem authentic and multi-dimensional. Bravo! I look forward to reading the rest.

wow, that was such a great update. Checking every night obsessively payed off tonight! I love this story so much. I wish it could go on forever but I know it must have an end.

Its me again some of my friends have been reading your fic an as a whole we all implore you to update ur chapters so that our inner fangirls are feeling better

please update soon this story is so utterly amazing i cant imagine that you dont have actual works published it reminds me of dozens of fairy tales mixed with the labrynth i love it and the way sarah and jareths relationship is evolving it absolutly amazing please please update soon or my imagination will cry incessantly for wanting to know what happens next if u need any help with the stories (ur amazing so i doubt u do) id be glad to help or if i cant do it( cough punctuate) i know people who will email me at silverdragon0315@aol.com when u update please