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asdfjk;/ So many Labyrinth stories are bad but this is just amazing. I can't wait until your next update!!

Please update! This story is so awesome <3

love your story and eagerly awaiting the next chapter with baited anxious breath a beautiful story that makes me wanna smack jared upside the head because he is sooooo dense but funny i also love how it explains y he steals kids

I have to say this is the best Labyrinth story ever, you have captured Jareth personality to a tee. there were times i was laughing so hard i was crying.
Please update soon, and i was wondering why is it that Amaranth keeps getting younger?

I started reading this story a bit over a year ago and I randomly check back today and imagine my surprise to find new chapters. I do hope you continue this story as it's realy good. Also the thing with the dresses and the acorns reminds me of a story I read in elementart school when we were studying variations of the "Cinderella" tale. I love the Jareth/Sarah pairing and I can't wait for more updates. I just hope they come soon.

Another great chapter! Ah, this story makes me happy. It fulfills my love of olds-chool fairytales (I had the red, green and blue fairy books growing up, and am currently looking for he rest) and my love of a good fantasy / romance (with a pinch of mystery, to boot). I salute you. ;)

Hey just writing to say how much I love your story! I was a little iffy about it in the beginning (I mean who wants to see Sarah in the mad house? lol) but now I can't wait for you to get the next chapter up! I know how busy life can be so I promise to be patient. ^-^

Hey you, Jess if I ,may call you that. My name is Ally, and let me tell you, I have written, and I have read amazing Labyrinth stories, but the way you capture everything, and .. I just find this to be my most favorite fic on any fan fiction site there is. I am a Beta, and have studied English and Literature, and many other things that pertain to language, grammar, and writing skills. I would be honored if we are to come friends, and to help with the story! You must continue to write! I also suggest you post it on Fanfiction.net, I am telling you the whole world would bow down with such respect for such a creative and non mary-sue fic. PLEASE keep writing. I am married and have a 3 year old, and she is autistic, and I still read and write. I wouldn't be able to deal with it if you just stopped. so please, continue, and like I said I would love to be friends, as well and doing beta'ing for you. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY AND THE IDEA... ONE IN A MILLION, all you labyrinth fans should be honored to have to have such an amazing artist with words.

Its absolutely amazing! Please give us an update soon!

Wow! I cannot wait for you to write more. Belated congrats on your nuptuals as well!

~*~ Maia