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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am TOTALLY loving this story. Infinitely richer than most other Labyrinth fanfiction I've read. And I adore your use of poems and quotes for each chapter. It brings such a wonderful additional flavor to your story. I'm glad you have an idea where this story is going; I'm excited to see you get there!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update again soon! This is a wonderful story so far!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
many of your readers have a hard time picturing sarah in her disguise, i thought your description was extremely adequite...
this is how i saw it from the picture you painted with your words: the cloak itself has a glamour that makes her look like a unique creature with dark leathery hands, feet and face (i will have to read it over again to see the facial shape and features), and a sort of patchwork furry pelt, i'm thinking like the calico cat that lives on my street... am i correct in my description?
maybe when i get the inspiration i will draw what i picture in my mind's eye and scan it and send it to you...
i'm still waiting for more of your wonderful story >=P
ginny
this is how i saw it from the picture you painted with your words: the cloak itself has a glamour that makes her look like a unique creature with dark leathery hands, feet and face (i will have to read it over again to see the facial shape and features), and a sort of patchwork furry pelt, i'm thinking like the calico cat that lives on my street... am i correct in my description?
maybe when i get the inspiration i will draw what i picture in my mind's eye and scan it and send it to you...
i'm still waiting for more of your wonderful story >=P
ginny
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really great!
It's so nice to see something new and original.
I'm having a hard time picturing Sarah though...I mean physically. What does she look like? How tall is she? Is the cloak a cloak, or does it become a second skin. I thought I had an idea of it, but I'm not completely sure...
Still, very interesting so far. I can't wait to read the rest.
It's so nice to see something new and original.
I'm having a hard time picturing Sarah though...I mean physically. What does she look like? How tall is she? Is the cloak a cloak, or does it become a second skin. I thought I had an idea of it, but I'm not completely sure...
Still, very interesting so far. I can't wait to read the rest.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Other than be confused on how Sarah's disguised, I absolutely love it!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like weaving threads of many colors, artfully creating a beautiful tapestry each chapter giving shape and form.
thank you,
ginny
thank you,
ginny
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another intriguing chapter!
I love Twiggy - meant to say that last time. And I also love your chapter explanations at the beginning and end - meant to say that before too.
Looking forward to the next up-date!
I love Twiggy - meant to say that last time. And I also love your chapter explanations at the beginning and end - meant to say that before too.
Looking forward to the next up-date!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your writing flows and is a pleasure to read. the story is unique and fascinating; i am enjoying it.
thank you,
ginny
thank you,
ginny
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh drat! Over too soon for my liking! Glad to see you updating though!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea where this is going - which is a good thing... and rare (certainly in my fanfic experience) - but I am enjoying the journey immensely so far. Just wish you'd up-date more often (and longer chapters!!!) ;o)