AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Return to the Labyrinth

by Gaeliceyes

person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolute genius! The first Labyrinth fic I've read, and I think you do a wonderful job! I really can't wait until he finds out who she is! You should update very quickly, because I love your writing!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Twiggy squirmed in her grip like a ferret on speed, but to no avail." <--Funniest line, and one that sentenced me to instant fandom.

Your story is the most original I have ever come across. Excellent writing, both spelling and grammar wise. I will be back soon to read more! Don't fail me now!

-AP
person Dazana
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Lovely job so far....can't wait for more!
person Gaki
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Finally a update!! I love this story and I really hope you update soon!
person luna26
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're continuing this story! Keep up the great work. :)
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
such amazing imagry, how real your words made everything seem!

there must have been quite a shift in the magic of the labyrinth to attract the attention of the king.

a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece:

::ginny's rum balls::

~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough
~mix in: mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum
~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good)

because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk...

always a pleasure!
ginny
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, i forgot!

if you need help editing, i can beta (i don't do lemons though)
general address on profile page, i will give you the other address if you contact me.

gin


schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only read a handful of Labyrinth fanfics so far, but your Goblin King is what I have been searching for; A Jareth with balls. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Please keep writing!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, he said he could be cruel *smirk*

the magic shift, your description was smooth, focused.

well played.

so happy you updated, i must find an appropriate reward for next time.

a pleasure,
ginny
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's been so long... i've missed your words =(

you were hinting of a ball? there are many preprations to make! will sarah make an appearance as herself, a sort of cinderella? it would be wonderful if you would consider updating soon?

healthy incentive to update... i am not above bribery >=P

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~yummy!

please, please (nor am i above begging)

thank you,
ginny

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?