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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely bloody hilarious!!!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was priceless! Lovely story :)
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great piece of work with a nice twist at the end. I could actually visualize the individual characters expressions as the parrot scene played out LOL Poor Will LOL Keep up the good work...:)
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I'm looking forward to more of your writing :D PLEASE :)
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA!!! That was wonderful! :D The Jack/Will play was really hot and Cotton's parrot afterwards was just the tickle I needed. Couldn't stop laughing. Well done!
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, i love the ending! nice touch with a parrot, very funny
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, holy poo, it's awesome, especially with the parrot!!! Keep up you're writing, you're brilliant! I eagerly await your next piece.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehe! that thing in the end is just something Jack woould do!that was very good!i love the bit at the end!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! And I loved the whole thing about Cotton's parrot overhearing. That's priceless.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey well that was pretty good for your first PotC Slash! But I have to say that my fav. part was the end with the bird! It was just priceless! Funny was Hell! Great Job!
~Sunako Kanzaki~
~Sunako Kanzaki~