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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was awesome getting to know Nola and her everything I want is everyhing I see attitude. She needs to be knocked down. I think Aid'ian , who is a SEXY BEAST, his rejection will only make her try harder. I love Santana's personality I hope she stays a little clueless to the General, make him work! Awesome writing and keep it up.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to read this again and say that I hate Nola! This is so good I had to post twice but I love it and I hope you update today. Will Nola get the General?I HOPE NOT!!!!! Okay continue writing.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I say you have a fan in me if you continue. I hate Nola. I hope Santana beats the crap out of her and her friends. Aid'ian sounds delicious HMMMM. I hope they get together. I like Santana's attitude towards Aid'ian, her unsure thoughts that he may like her. This is going to be excellent.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is EXCELLENT and I can not wait for you to update this, I will probably read it about four more times.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love this story already and its barely started. Please post more soon!
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the second chapter we see Nola is very much into what she wants and who cares about anybody else. Aid'ian better be careful but I think he knows what he is doing. Santana wont know what hit her. Excellent writing continue
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The feel of this story makes me want more, it is Classic Guy/Girl stuff and I am hooked. Awesome writing
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is marvelous and so will be my favorite, PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS KIND OF STUFF!
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this. Your writing has flow and does not drag and bore you. This is very good. The characters are Awesome. I love Santana and Sexy Aid'ian(SWEET NAME) and I already DETEST NOLA. I can't wait until you update this I'll keep looking for it evoD
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME START!!! I hope there willbe more. I'll tell my friend about this one:)