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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm adoring this story! It's slightly left of centre, and I like it.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh do keep going! Don't let this one go down like the Pearl in DMC! I like your plot. I love the attitude Eva has, and I'm interested in seeing if her whole ordeal changes things.
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You’ve got a great story line going and you’ve done an excellent job on character development! I'm really hooked so please keep writing when you have the time.
Katie
Katie
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update? Pwetty, pwetty pwease? I was on tenterhooks the whole time, I swear to god. And Jack... awww. I'll just leave it at that before I ruin anything. But pleeeaaase update soon!
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bloody hell! on with it!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks promising to me - please continue soon, I can smell lemony goodness ahead... ;)
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARRRRRGH!!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You've totally got me addicted! You must continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story!!! You must continue and update faster! I'm completely hooked! I would rather read this story than write my own lol!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this! It's a nice story without being too cliche.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that I'm completely engulfed in this story, you're gonna have to get the rest of it posted... soon, very soon...