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ch6: Missed out on chapter five because of a loading error(?) Darn it.

Chapters 1 th 4, and 6 were great. Talk about your May / December. How long do these guys live anyway?

Missed out on chapter five because of a loading problem - Darn it.

Chapters 1 - 4, and 6 were great. On top of the sensuality, there was also so much humor - always a good thing.

So... how long do these guys live anyway?

You know, I am not a "Slash" reader but I found myself enjoying this story very, very much.

In my opinion you have two things going for you with this story:

1 It is very good
2 It is very good

I hope I do not sound redundant by saying this but this is very good.

FINALLY. I was getting weak from withdrawal, you know, tehehehe. And thank you for the e-mail as well, you're just a major sweetheart. I shouldn't be begging for another chapter when you've just updated, so I won't say more than I will eagerly await your next installment. I really enjoyed this Deron/Maria-pairing, and while I would love to see more, I also want to know what's in store for the other couple... uh, triple.. Kir, Salek and Sam. Don't keep us in the dark too long now, ya hear? =)

oh I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't take so long. I really really love this story.........

Mmmmm, hot. Love a guy who'll stand up for a/his girl.

I had typed up a *huge* reply in regards to your recent Chapter 6 with Maria and Deron, but AFF decided to backup their site at the exact same nanosecond I pushed "review". I tried hitting the back button on my browser but I got the same message.

I would type it all out again, but the muse is gone; most of it was brainstorming and free-writing. Needless to say I am very angry.

But I still kept refreshing the page so I could leave *something*. So, for the very severely cut cliff notes version of what I typed earlier: Thank you very much for the update, it was wonderful. =)

You want to make me cry, right? Right? *squuezes out some tears* There. Now update, babe. =D

That was one of the hottest stories i've ever read and this is the kind of story i will keep coming back for.

Concur'd with Chancellor over there. I love the way you work in this quirky humor into the story, and a believeable scenario on how an extraterrestrial would react to say, a BDSM harness or something else they haven't seen before.... hee hee. Very amusing. And you know, I am very jealous of Sam for taking part in that scrumptious Yautja sandwich. No fair, I say. She should share her mates. With me.
Needless to say, your writing is always such a treat to read. And I am dying to see what happens in the next chapter, with Deron and Maria. He seems like such a lecherous little Yautja-scamp... =D