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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start; please continue this
really interacts with the movie
really interacts with the movie
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story. it has a pretty interesting plot. please update
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good! Will the Predators be the bad guys in this story? I will just have to wait and see......
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so HATE Harold with a passion. You have killed my son. Ugh I hate when they try to act so righteous when all is lost like Ted said. I hope he dies some TERRIBLE death. PREDATORS. I LOVE THAT NAME Jai'n. All I have to say now is bring it on.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH yeah! The Predators are coming! I hope that HArold and his people DIE!. I am having mixed feelings though I think Redd is sweet and I do not wish to see him perish. I love this story and keep going and as promised I will update today.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that name Jai'n. It is about TIME you updated. Now there is going to be a fight with Redd that I can not wait to see. I hope Harold and Kel'her're get what is coming to them. I must say that i love Redd also Please do not kill him and I think the robot is the Monster.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the upload
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where are the updates? I am waiting for them so please hurry please.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and update Malie
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the few os your stories left I would really appreciate it if you would update this. I love it even though Aliens are good in this one, well I think they are good. Anyway I want an update......Please!