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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is a little better (ch.2), but I think you should flesh it out more. Sometimes while reading, I feel as if it is simply a rehash of the original story, but spoken in a more casual modern way... which for the time period doesn't quite mesh.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed!
This is really wonderful!
Sensually dark Erik will always be my favourite (it's so sexy!), but it's always nice for a lighter change!
With your style of writing I'm looking forward to when their relationship hits new levels (wink win
This is really wonderful!
Sensually dark Erik will always be my favourite (it's so sexy!), but it's always nice for a lighter change!
With your style of writing I'm looking forward to when their relationship hits new levels (wink win
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you got two reviews practically the SAME from me.
I thought that the first one didn't through because it came up with 'unable to connect to database server'.
Stupid Internet!
Well, you could just think of it as how much I love your story! Th
I thought that the first one didn't through because it came up with 'unable to connect to database server'.
Stupid Internet!
Well, you could just think of it as how much I love your story! Th
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
And more would be where???
Damn that was a bad place to end the chapter! I wanted to read more!!! *shoulders slump forward in resignment*
I hate having to wait! It's not fair on my insanity!
Well, I'll go now and start pacing until the next chapter
Damn that was a bad place to end the chapter! I wanted to read more!!! *shoulders slump forward in resignment*
I hate having to wait! It's not fair on my insanity!
Well, I'll go now and start pacing until the next chapter
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad she accepted him with no big fuss. Ew Buquet!!! I'm glad Christine is safe with Erik now. Update soon please!!!
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome....I can't wait for more...well done.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
ok, hey, not cool. need more! I like this view of the story. She's not afraid of him nor is she going gaga over Raoul. But this is kinda sweet how she has a crush on him--let's just hope that doesn't end when she see's his not so pretty side. Erik is
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
To quote Erik himself: Bravo, Bravo, Bravissma....
I really liked this chapter (4), very tender as the title says. These are the stories I love the read, the happy ones. XD I'm all for angst, but happiness and romance is so much better. :)
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I really liked this chapter (4), very tender as the title says. These are the stories I love the read, the happy ones. XD I'm all for angst, but happiness and romance is so much better. :)
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
That chapter had me floating on air!
Oh to have Erik sing like that to me...*goes off in fantasyland*
As for the pacing? Well I say I can't wait for our next downpour! We'll have our very own moat with a bit of a lake too!
Looking forward to the
Oh to have Erik sing like that to me...*goes off in fantasyland*
As for the pacing? Well I say I can't wait for our next downpour! We'll have our very own moat with a bit of a lake too!
Looking forward to the
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
ok,well, I'm glad that I'm in your head but please, will you let me out so I can finish my own stories? lol. I love the way you worded the song and their actions. Its sweet w/o the nausea. lol. But you need more, more, more! Come on, don't leave me han