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I love it. Wow. I am not really into Star Wars but I did like the one movie that dealt with little Ani and Padme meeting......And this story just makes me want to rewatch it it is so good. You did a hell of a good job, the details kick ass and the story telling is excellent. I adore the use of the quotes and the timing of each one is perfect, it captures the feeling of each section wonderfully. You are a spectacular storyteller and I hope that you will write more.. thi this point I will read whatever you write, you have talent!

Nice work. I love how you've taken the existing plot and "filled in the blanks" so to speak. Your writing was solid, although uld uld go a little easier on the adverbs. There were some sentences that had more than adveadverb in it, which stands out very conspicuously. Other than that, I really enjoyed the read. Sexy and romantic in a very believable way.

This is terrific! KellyB is very well versed in Star Wars lore - her stories are the best SW fanfic I have read. Thank you so much for writing this KellyB!

Ok, I found these stories by chance and was so enthralled that I stayed up all night to read them. My two small children are going to be in for quite a day as a result. This story was beautiful, haunting, and provocative beyond belief. Not only is the story great, but your writing is exquisite. I have never read any of the Star Wars books, I've only seen the movies. If you write more of this thread I would love to read it.
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Thank you for sharing.

This has got to be the best dark Anakin/Padme story I have ever read!! Absolutely brilliant!! You write with such vivid descriptions that I feel like I'm right there watching it unfold! And you stuck right to canon, which I could never do! It took my breath away!

Brilliant!

What a great story!!!You have such a talent.Where did you learn to write like this.Never red such a good story about Anakin and Padme and I can say I have really red a lot.

Wow, what an awesome story! Kinda depressing at the end, but we all know that it wasn't going to be a happy ending anyways. Can't wait to read the sequel! Great job, very passionate and sexy.

all i can say is wow in a good way