rate_review Reviews

You know...just fyi...you don't have to put a disclaimer every chapter...only once. ^^; Just you know...so you know...you seem quite frustrated trying to do something you really don't need to... I'm enjoying the story though! ^^;

-Moonstar

great to see a unique story in this section.

keep up the good work!

Oooh, poetry! Did you write it yourself? Nicely done. ^_^ (Well, I mean I know it's a song...but without a tune...it's like poetry...^^;)

Great start...... more, more, more..... please......

Beezel

That's better. It wasn't showing up for awhile there. For a Mary-Sue...this is well written. I actually just happened it upon it...I liked your username. *shrug* I was bored, but this isn't too terrible. I might come back and read more if you update soon, you have lovely descriptions. Quite intriguing. ^_^

Oh! Well...that update was quick. *raises eyebrow* How much of this do you plan to put up right away? Or is this all I get for now? The way you describe how Jack's dangerously quiet words effect the crew like a bellow...painted a vivid image for me. And has he spotted our witches so soon? Or is he imagining things? *curious* Your chapters are so short...(though I did just get two in a row...^^;)...I just start getting into reading it and then it's over. *sigh* Well, I suppose I'll live. (c:

-Moonstar