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by KNaranak

schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cute story. it makes me want to laught and feel all happy. lots of love for this one
person oobbdd616
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE MOTHERFUCKER!
person darqstar who is too lazy to sign in properly
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I still have a bit of trouble grasping Otis allowing himself to be totally dominated by Rufus, but what the hell, the story is good enough that I can accept it. Keep writing!
person darqstar
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I was thinking, have you considered also posting this in crossovers? I think you'd have to pretty much submit it twice, as if it were two different stories, but it does qualify as a crossover! And, maybe you'd find a bigger audience.

Just a suggestion. Feel free to laugh and dismiss! :-)
person Firefly Lover
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews all. Thanks Darqstar...I have a bilingual keyboard so the font and psacing I see is not always what others see for some reason. Please let me know if things look off so I can fix them. I always appreciate it!
person darqstar
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. My only complaint is that the last paragraph could be split into two or more. It's a bit long and therefore, rough on the eyes. (Then again, I'm going blind in my old age, so I could just be being bitchy.) But, good job, and a lousy place to leave us hanging, I hope you'll be posting more soon.
person Firefly Lover
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry kids!
I go the flu pretty bad and my baby fuzzy child was diagnosed with cancer so I've been out of it. Expect more prolly this week! No I haven;t abandoned it Anon! In the words of Hugo, "sit tight, I've something real special for ya...".
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you're just busy and not going to abandon this story. There's a sad lack of *good* writers for these movies, I hate to see someone being turned off by the lack of reviews.

In other words, I love the story, please continue!
person Firefly Lover
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anon,
Thanks for your reviews. Ideally I am trying to get a crossover year...a few years before TCM2 but before the ending of Rejects. Thank you for your review it was somethign that was bugging me, so I took a few days to think about it. Keep up the questions, I appreciate all of the feedback.
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. *But* I just want to point out that House/Rejects was in the late 70's. TCM 2 is the mid 80's. If you're going along the lines that the stuff from TCM2 wouldn't have happened yet, you're fine. (and yeah, that's totally possible.)

I really hope you update this soon. I'm liking it.

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