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Wow, I really loved this. It's so damn good, I can't wait until you write the next part of this series!

Again, I am in awe of the commanding and sensual persona you’ve created for the dark lord! Lylla is fast-becoming one of my favorite OCs and you fleshed her character out beautifully in this chapter. I really enjoyed her progression from cruel to compassionate and, instead of making her seem weak, she now appears stronger than ever.

The flashback scenes were powerful and provided very credible insight into both Vader and Lylla’s state of mind. And the sex, well……*fans self*……Wow!

Can’t wait for the next part!

~Arica

I don't think I can truly do this story justice; no amount of praise that I might think of could be enough. I still remember the first time I read "Down Time" and "Dark Angel Unleashed", I put away my own pen and refused to write for days afterwards, because there was no way in hell I'd be able to surpass your skill.

I still know I can't write as well as you, but I've come to accept it! ;) Your Vader is so deliciously tormented, Lylla so wonderfully dark, and Palpatine so bone-chillingly evil... your descriptive prowess is, quite simply, awe-inspiring. I'm soooo adding this to my recs.


Now get to work on part IV!

I have no fitting words to do justice to how good this fic is. I am in awe! Wonderful, just wonderful! This is exceptional.

wow loved it!! I can't wait to read more :D

Awesome as expected, intense as always...I wish we could rate stories at higher than 5 stars!

Wonderful read, Ivy. I always enjoy an excursion into the dark, depraved world that you sometimes delve into, when you aren't writing the wonderful Fett Dynasty. You are one of the few writers out there who can write an OFC for Vader that doesn't make me want to scream the dreaded 'Mary Sue'! expletive. Great job :-)

Xizor WISHES he could have a woman like her!! Vader beeter keep an eye on her since she is so popular!