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for Hand in hand in a violent life.

by DarkTemplar

person Lovedance Lady
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Am speechless. Goodness, I got all teary-eyed, literally. You are a genious. The emotions, the beauty of all... all the love... *loves you to pieces* Thank you! (PS. I've read the prequel as well... same holds...) O/A=>OTP. forever :)
person Anakingirl05
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had no idea you posted this here!! Oh my...I can not say enough about this, you must know that. Your imagery is breathtaking and the way you portray how they just wanted eachother....guh!! And your dialougue is perfection, you just get them so right. You paint a beautiful picture with your words, one that will stay with me for a very long time.
person Anakingirl05
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...and "I want you in my bed"...I die every time I read that. Oh, Anakin...don't we all??
person BrynneEryn
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so touching! Their interaction was so moving and sweet--I just wanted to jump right in the fic and hug them both. I loved the way Anakin was unsure of so many things, but Obi-Wan did his best to reassure him that he was loved. I hope we see more from you soon--especially if it's about Ani/Obi!
person Vee
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“I want you in my bed…” I melted there. This story is so beautiful. I love Obi-Wan's worry over Anakin as their separated further apart than before and his rush to his aid. One of my favourite parts was Anakin sending out a force wave that crushed the droids. I've always pictured him doing that and to see it written finall, is just so wonderful and maybe a bit squee^_^
I love the stolen moments they get. It's just lovely. This story rocks!
person Vee
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so recommending this. I'm blown away by your imagery! The description you got into when they were looking at each other, I could just see Anakin basked in this golden glow, and looking just so beautiful. Lucky Obi-Wan getting Anakin in all his naked glory, and lucky Ani too. And more with Anakin's roboclaw, I loved it. How reluctant and worried he was about Obi-Wan's reaction and also at the beginning where he was scared that Obi changed his mind.
This was an excellent fic. I hope you decide to do more in the future:)

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