rate_review Reviews

Hot intimate scenes. I like the idea that you used the effect of fire to describe this erotic image!

I really have never read a more beautiful love scene than this. You wrote their love-making in this wonderful flowing style; it isn't desperate or obsessive--it is absolutely breath-taking. Argh, I seriously cannot express to you how much I love this story!! I love how you wrote about Anakin's undying devotion to Obi-Wan; it makes their changing relationship so much more plausible. Arrgh, and you made their relationship so pure! *sighs in content* Anyway, you are an AMAZING writer! I really hope you write more fics about them!

*Darth Vader voice* Never underestimate the power of the Slash Side...

All I can say is..Damn. That was so fucking hot.

I loved this 'fic. It was amazing!! Definatly on my top 5 favorit Star Wars ObiWanAnakin pairings!!

That was very well done!! Please write more Obi/Ani!!

Wow! That was VERY good! You wrote it well and kept them in character! Keep up the awesome work!

Wow! Now THAT was HOT! Great job! And I really liked how Obi-Wan accepted it...admitting that they had bonded in other ways. Really showed how this was meant to be. The council may not agree, but to heck with them! I just love these two together. Great job!

Another ObiAni! Score! thank you so much for writing this, I loved it. Your description as Obi-Wan wakes up in blue moonlight was perfect. I could completely see that. And that is so Anakin to strut around naked and not care in the least;)
For a one-shot, the portrayal of emotions and uncetainty fron Obi-Wan was great as was Anakin's prodding and retreat, only to prod more:D The story had a nice strady rhythm and I just ah! *loves* No words.
Thank You! ^_^