rate_review Reviews

Wow! i really like your story, it has a plot line that I am really excited about. Even teh OCC of Riddick is ok I mean he is kinda shocked and there for acting out of charater. I can't wait for teh next chapter.

good...im running out of stuff to say....its good....

cool chappie...

woooo did a good job *cookies 4 u*

this is such a cool story...only one critique, slow down on the "honey" and "baby" talk. i kindof...dulls his character.....if you get me? but otherwise great job (-:.

bebe, you are so right!! I wrote this a while back and now, reading it, I see how out of character he is. My Riddicks now are much harder. I've considering fixing this but it would be a vast undertaking.

So, forgive me for it being a bit out of character. Jack will make up for it in the end.

And I still hold to the opinion that Riddick can change, but that it can't be instanteous. Riddick can be NICE!! It just has to be a slow subtle change and I don't think this was. I think it came to fast, too much, and too F*CKING SWEET! So, thank you for your opinion, I *completely* agree with you! :-D

Chris

oh my gosh no!...poor jack...poor riddick...i felt so bad when i read that... it was a realli good chapter...

omg, noooo....goshness, i hope there isnt alot of angst......that was a good chapter...your actually a good writer.

More, i need moooore! Pretty please?

that was a really good chapter...