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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nothing wrong with a little smut sweetheart :)
EG:)
EG:)
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I didn't see that at Vdff.
Wow never been so happy that Johns is dead!
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Wow never been so happy that Johns is dead!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I've always been very fond of this pairing, although there are hardly any fics with them... The story itself is very good but the best part is your awesome, poetic writing style. It works wonderfully to create the ambience of the story and compliments your excellent characterizations. I didn't catch any mistakes, but you might wish to consider using the term "dislocate" when mentioning Riddick's painful trick with his shoulders.
You're a very talented writer and personally I'd be very glad to see you write more slash.
You're a very talented writer and personally I'd be very glad to see you write more slash.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You write very well! I´m not into slash fics, but this got me curious, and yes, it could very well fit into the movie... I didn´t find any nits. It all looked great. The imagery was perfect.
Nic.
Nic.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, well, personally I´d love to see you write more non-slash... But that´s just me. ;-)
Nic.
Nic.