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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I loved it!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh. Such a sweet story...
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story and your writing is wonderful, but the dialogue is very stiff and unnatural. It's more the way that a writter would describe a situation and less the way that a person would in a conversation.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful, i know how Will feels, i didn't get retribution though. i like yur story, your writing is awesome.