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Chapter 16 is fascinating. Lots of mysteries, rich details, intrigue-- I love this story!

continua escribiendo, la relacion entre vadre y luke me parece escalofriante pero maravillosa,despues de todo para un niño que no conocio a sus padres estos se vuelventodo para el

Although i spose necessary, this chapter was slightly boring. There was a lot contemplating and thought that sort of went around in circles, and didn't seem to have a point. Some of it was interesting and important, but the rest was kinda pointless. That is until the end, very exciting cliff hanger there. I'm sorry if i seem mean, I'm just trying to give you constrictive criticism and an honest oppioin. You know that i absolutlely love your stories and this one is definetley one of my all time favourites.
Can't wait till your next chapter and the Rebel scene.
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Thankyou!Thankyou!Thankyou! I have been *waiting* for this. Hugs & kisses from a happy dancing pervy Sith fancier. ;-)

I took a break from my comp and when I come back, what do I find? A new chapter! And what a wonderful surprise it was. ^^x Wow, a lot of Light/Dark Side discussions going on in this fic and the angst! Ha! Qui-Gon's going to train Vaderkin to be a good Sith?! Wicked! XD And Damon reminds me of Anakin when he was pursuing Padmé: very stubborn and forceful. ^^ Ok, the Archive is just freaking me out and I'm craving a Vader/Luke sex scene so much! I can't wait! 8D

OH MY WORD!! That was QUITE a twist at the end!!!! I loved it! I adore this story. I really hope you'll have more posted soon!

Oh...wow. This fic is awesome. The characterizations, blended with new situations make for an intruiging story that is very realistic. And the sex! *dies* Excellent, the whole fic is just wonderful, and action-packed. Looking forward to more from you!

I just started reading this fanfic, and though I am only five chapters in a wanted to leave a review. I'm so busy lately that I'm afraid that I'll forget to comment in my rush to go do something. I love this story. I love the whole concept, and I'm already addicted. You're a very talented writer. Keep it coming!

Jennifer

As I have said before I love this story and the mystery and intrigue as well as the romance just keeps getting better. I look forward to future chapters which will provide some answers to the question of Anakin's birth as well as how deeply his and Luke's relationship will develop. Sue ;)

Finally! A new chapter! XD *sighs* I just love those tender Vaderkin/Luke moments and *gasps* Vaderkin was concieved in a cave?! o0 I can't wait to read the explanation on that! ^^x Eagerly awating the next chapter!