rate_review Reviews

I have loved this story since i found it on another site. I find it to have a great if a little intense plot  at times. I would love to know what happens next. I hope even thought you have all of the other stories that you are currently busy with that there will be time in the future to see what will happen next with Forbidden. As this is one story that has such a great plot and could unfold in any number of ways that it literally has one hanging on the edge of their seat waiting patiently to see were the story will go next.

Please continue when you have the time Ray!!!

 

i love this story and i've been to your site and love those stories but could you finish this one,n please

I read this story a number of years ago and recently reread it. It's intriguing plot wise ,hot and a great read. It's too bad you've abandoned it. I know you write original fiction these days, I'm actually a member of your site, but I still hope you'll come back to this someday.

hello hello darling! I recently stumbled upon your fan fiction and wanted to tell you that I am enjoying so far! I'm on chapter 10 at the moment and simply adore the development. very excited to read more! I am a Luke/Vader fan so it's often hard to find good reads so thank you for posting.

I have never read a story with this pairing before but, I have to say I am now hooked. I absolutely love Forbidden. I hope you plan to return to this story some day. I would love to read more.

Forbidden is facinating so far, a ver good read I give 5 out of 5 .

Do you know that despite my deep and abiding love for this story I never connected you with RaytheReign? Fail.
I love this story, it's both creepy in its obsessive dark qualities and gorgeous by virtue of your word choice and character development. I'm with you in the cancer boat, and I know what it does to a person. I'm so glad to see you kicking ass and writing again.

I think you should send Forbidden to Disney, so they can use the scenario for Star Wars VII <3

*speechless* ...
I love you.
I mean, I love the stuff you write, so please, continue !

It seems you haven't updated Forbidden for quite a while (or if you have somewhere, please tell me ! I went from fanfiction.net to squidge.org, then here, and I don't see Forbidden in RaytheReign but maybe the story is still somewhere else ?? *big starry eyes full of hope*), but please take pity on the poor desperate soul begging on her knees to have more of Vader x Luke...

I'm aching to know more about the story, and to have more of smut of course.
Since I've read Guardian Devil I have had very hard time finding a fanfiction who could compare with yours you know... A fic with such a captivating and intriguing story, and with so erotic stuff too. Then I read Forbidden and I must admit that didn't disappoint me (which is an euphemism for "I couldn't think of anything else for the whole week and could hardly take my eyes off the screen"). I really wish you don't drop that piece !

Anyway, I've seen a bit of your site RaytheReign, and it looks well like heaven to me (erotic and fantasy and dark and yaoi and written by you ? all my dreams come true !), so I'll probably join (very) soon ^^

Thanks a lot for this, alas incomplete, but so great in every chapter, every line, every word story !!

CDM.

I really love this story. I've been checking on it for updates, but since there hasn't been any, I'm asking you to please not give up on this story. I would love to read another chapter.