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YES! YES! My thoughts exactly! I have often noticed that many authors are too lazy, rushed, or uneducated to use proper grammar and spelling (also one of my pet peeves).

"Kagome's Paths" is the first story of your's that I am in the process of reading so far. I was delighted when I was able to read it without mentally correcting errors. Your story is wonderfully entertaining, your grammar and spelling are impeccable, your characterizations are flawless. No doubt you take pride in your writing.

Thank you so much for the efforts you have made to make your story so enjoyable.

Wright More SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE THANKYOU for YOUR TIME.

I would first like to say I have to agree with you on the point you made about spelling and grammar! I can not tell you how many times I have started a story only to turn away because it seemed like a third grader had written it! I do enjoy your writing however and love the cross over between Inuyasha and the movie the labyrinth, I too have dreamt of David Bowie! ^_^ I am also a humble author and love to write fanfiction in my spare time. I commend you on your grasp of the english language and can only hope that in my study of your native language that I fare as well. I truly hope you will update soon as I can not wait to see (read) the look on Jared's face when Kagome solves his labyrinth as I know she will! I am now a big fan of your story and will continue to check for updates. If you ever have a chance please take a look at my own attempt at fanfiction in the anime section. It is under Inuyasha and is a pairing between kagome and Sesshomaru, please excuse me if there are any errors as I have only my tired eyes to review what I have written and there may be some mistakes. Unfortunately I do not have Word or a Beta reader to help in my corrections. I look forward to your comments should you choose to read it as well as any suggestions you may have. I will be sincerely waiting for your next update! ^_^

Love the new chapter. I can't wait untill he finds out about her. I'm glade I found this story.
I've been looking for a good Inuyasha and Labyrinth crossover. I tryed writing my own but
it's hard to put the two together. But you have done a brilliant job. I use brilliant instead of
good or awsome. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm excited, Jareth iis finally going to
visit Kagome. Bye.

*Dark Fey (I changed my name)*

Yes! Someone actually wrote a Jareth/Kagome fic. Update asap! ^_~

I wasn't sure about the story when I read the summary. But once I read the story I thought it was brilliant. I have only read and seen one other Inuyasha and Labyrinth crossover and it was not good. I think Jareth and Kagome is a good match. Update soon.

Wonderful work. When I first saw your idea of a Labyrinth/Inuyasha crossover it didn't seem like a good match, but my curiosity got the better of me and I am glad it did. You have really captured the characters characterized well. I love that you made the worm in to a butterfly. Your story is the first story that has done that, and I have read a great deal of Labyrinth fan fiction. I love your new character Hiroyuki he reminds me of Hudson from the Disney’s Gargoyles show. Did you come up with the idea of him from them? There is a line that is similar to your about Gargoyles having no need for names.

Can’t wait to see your next chapter. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us.

I just finished Chapter 5. I really like your story so far. I'm really excited about it because I had an idea for a Labyrinth/Inu Yasha crossover but thought no one would be interested in it (my story involved the daughter of Sarah and Jareth in the role of Goblin Queen who got to play host to Sesshoumaru when Inu Yasha wished him away). Thank you for being so much braver than I am! I may go back and start that story after all, seeing as the particular crossover obviously has at least some fans.

Your story really is a joy to read. You get the idea that Kagome has matured and put a lot of things behind her, yet she is still recognizable as Kagome. Jareth is very on character as well, I can not wait for his next appearance! I too, have always thought that Hoggle harbored some sort of feeling for Sarah (much like Jaken and his feelings for Sesshoumaru in my opinion). I also love the ever so polite caterpillar that metamorphosed into a butterfly. Very nice touch.

If you hadn't told me that your native language was not English, I would never have known. Your grammar and spelling are fantastic. I agree with you on so many of the things you wrote at the end of Chapter 5. I've stopped reading stories with great ideas because of the grammar and spelling mistakes. It's really unfortunate.

Wow, this review is very long and I’ll wrap it up after a few things: if you like the movie Labyrinth, you may (if you haven’t already) want to see The Princess Bride. A very, very good Labyrinth website to go to is www.rattlebeak.com . Go to Artwork, and there is a picture of Jareth done by Stephanie V. that amazes me. The site also hosts fanfictions. Feel free to email me and let me know if you found the site and movie okay and if you enjoyed them.

on your note about fanfictions and how bad they are...
YES!!!! SOMEONE ELSE NOTICED!!!!! Inu-yasha is, thanks to Takahashi Rumiko breaking more or less every possible record for manga length, the most widely written fanfiction on the internet. Yet out of a hundred fics, ninety-nine are total crap. Bad grammar, out of character, rushed, plotless, filled with spelling errors... did I mention the bad grammar? This is a very interesting crossover, and a well written one so far. Especially considering the fact that it contains Inu-yasha- that's usually a bad thing since more or less NO ONE EVER BOTHERS TO WRITE GOOD FICS!!!!!! (this is a pleasant exception to the rule. :-))
I like yours. I look forward to reading more of it, and hearing where everyone went. Hail to the tight-pants.

Ohh, interesting. I've been toying with the idea of a crossover, too... actually with Kagome wishing InuYasha away. C'mon, I'd like to see Jareth sing Magic Dance to *him*. XD

Anyways, good start, though I wonder about how well a romance between these too could happen... but then again I'm a slightly-rabid Inu/Kag shipper. All the same, if it's well done, more power to you! ^-^