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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please keep it going its good update soon TTFN
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Konnichiwa DarkStar-san! Did I get the translation right? Well I really like what your story, although I hope Inu-chan shows up. I would like to get to know you better. I was also wondering if you need a beta for the story, if so let me know. I'm really looking forward to your next update, you really have me hooked. Ja Ne Kagehoshi-san
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I read it once before I went to work and the second time when I got off. Uou are doing an excellent job of using Jareth. I'm kinda curious to see if anyone whille use Inuyasha and make Seshomaru into Jareth or not. IT'd be different. lol....But I'm weird.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really don't have any stories on this fanfiction site, but I konw when I find a good story and this story is really, really good one. I have read alot of stories before but I keep coming back to see if you updated this story because I love it and I want to read more to find out what happens and if the Goblin King finds out anymore stuff that happened in Kagome's past. So please update soon!!!
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wonderfully delightful piece. By the writing alone you couldn't possibly guess that English wasn't a natural language to you. Your writing is marvelous, I have enjoyed the story greatly. I really like the cross-over, I've been hooked on InuYasha for a while and my love for Labyrinth has only recently been renewed. I even got the movie again on DVD, since I don't even own a VCR anymore. I heard about the Manga, I'm really going to have to look into that. I will check back frequently for updates, that I promise.
hehe Looks like Kagome is purifying the Labyrinth without even knowing it. Hmmm, I wonder if Jareth is going to be tricky and con Souta out of the answers he needs before Kagome knocks him on his ass again. *giggles* Ohhh, promises of lemons... well now that's certainly going to be interesting. For your storyline was Kagome in love with InuYasha or was it more of a brother-sisterly bond?
hehe Looks like Kagome is purifying the Labyrinth without even knowing it. Hmmm, I wonder if Jareth is going to be tricky and con Souta out of the answers he needs before Kagome knocks him on his ass again. *giggles* Ohhh, promises of lemons... well now that's certainly going to be interesting. For your storyline was Kagome in love with InuYasha or was it more of a brother-sisterly bond?
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I like this story a lot. I do hope that you update soon, si'l vous plait. Merci et bonne chance!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how yes, I really like this, odd paring but they work just right. Its like the Sesshomaru and Kagome fic that I read I can't wait for the next chapter, I really want to know what will happen next. Adding to my bookmarks.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Finally! A wonderfully written, completely captivating and extremely detailed Labyrinth crossover fic.
I simply adore the way you've managed to capture the essence of the characters, from Kagome's headstrong determination, to Souta's fierce loyalty to his oneesan, and, hardest of all, the fragile balance between Jareth's arrogant pride and bitter loneliness. (At least in my view, you may have had a different intention, but this is how I found myself perceiving the characters in the style and way you wrote them.)
The way your scenes flow so smoothly, incorporating OCs which feel lifelike and fun, rather than the usual flat one-dimensional mockeries so many other stories tend to lapse into, quite honestly add something vital to the canon characters development, and thus to the fic itself.
Your descriptions are easy to read and brilliantly emotive without becoming too flowery and overly heavy with prose, or falling into unnecessary dialogue with no purpose other than to waste space, and to be honest, this has been more than a pleasure to read.
I found myself falling into the world you created here and keenly feeling at a loss when my journey through your character's eyes ended so suddenly.
You've made yourself one more fan here, and I look forward to any more updates I hope you will be able to add in the future.
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~
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Finally! A wonderfully written, completely captivating and extremely detailed Labyrinth crossover fic.
I simply adore the way you've managed to capture the essence of the characters, from Kagome's headstrong determination, to Souta's fierce loyalty to his oneesan, and, hardest of all, the fragile balance between Jareth's arrogant pride and bitter loneliness. (At least in my view, you may have had a different intention, but this is how I found myself perceiving the characters in the style and way you wrote them.)
The way your scenes flow so smoothly, incorporating OCs which feel lifelike and fun, rather than the usual flat one-dimensional mockeries so many other stories tend to lapse into, quite honestly add something vital to the canon characters development, and thus to the fic itself.
Your descriptions are easy to read and brilliantly emotive without becoming too flowery and overly heavy with prose, or falling into unnecessary dialogue with no purpose other than to waste space, and to be honest, this has been more than a pleasure to read.
I found myself falling into the world you created here and keenly feeling at a loss when my journey through your character's eyes ended so suddenly.
You've made yourself one more fan here, and I look forward to any more updates I hope you will be able to add in the future.
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update as soon as you can.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Zenryaku,
Ogenki desu ka. This is a lovely story, I am greatly enjoying the plot and the characters. You seem to have captured the pre-existing characters very well, and your original characters are engaging and realistic without being overbearing, or stereotypical. I also find your English to be very impressive. I am currently studying in Japan, and I have a very developed awareness of the challange of a completely foreign language. Prior readers are telling the truth when they compliment your use of punctuation and vocabulary, I also find your use of English slang very imressive. I am currently teaching a class on slang at the local Prefectural University, and your grasp is rather impressive. I look forward to your next posting. Douzo ogenki de.
Sousou.
Ogenki desu ka. This is a lovely story, I am greatly enjoying the plot and the characters. You seem to have captured the pre-existing characters very well, and your original characters are engaging and realistic without being overbearing, or stereotypical. I also find your English to be very impressive. I am currently studying in Japan, and I have a very developed awareness of the challange of a completely foreign language. Prior readers are telling the truth when they compliment your use of punctuation and vocabulary, I also find your use of English slang very imressive. I am currently teaching a class on slang at the local Prefectural University, and your grasp is rather impressive. I look forward to your next posting. Douzo ogenki de.
Sousou.