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You have to continue this. i need to know what happens next or i'm going to go insane

Hey, I really love the series. It's actually what got me interested in Pitch Black fanfiction. I usually stick to anime, but one day while I was doing a search I stumbled upon this little treasure. Seriously, you got me hooked. I love how you portrayed the inner thoughts and conflicts of Riddick. It's just as complex and detailed as I imagine the real Riddick would be. You're a really great writer. Everything was always clear and understandable, which can be hard to do when you're getting into a person's head. But you made everything flow together naturally. I also appreciate your attention to detail when it comes to grammar and spelling. A lot of authors just send their work out without any thought toward those who might be reading it. It's a shame. Sometimes they have a storyline or plot that's really great but it ends up being ruined by poor grammar and misspellings. It takes a lot of work, noone's perfect after all, but if you care about your writing then you should do your best to make it as great as you can. Anyway, I really like your work. (The Claimer's Keeps trilogy isn't the only fic I've read) Keep it up. I hope, someday, you get around to finishing this. ^_^

~Ash~

Please, please update soon! I really love this trilogy!

Please update this real soon, I really want to read more, and I am sure others who have reviewed would love to read more of this great story too!!!

That was a great story, please update soon, I would love to read more!!!!

Hey please say you are going to update this soon.....it is a great story and I am sure all of us would love to see what happens!!!

Please update this story! I love it!

what a great story, please continue it!

this is such agreat story, i hope that you finish it soon!

Wow. You've got a great story going so far!! PLEASE!!! please please please update soon! its a great story!!