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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is great pls continue
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far please update son.
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to find there wasn't more than just the one chapter for this story. It really had me interested and I would have loved to read more :)
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This looks really good and I've been waiting for an updated for... well... ever! Please update or, like I said to someone else, say something... tell if you arent gonna write anymore.. but I hope you finish I really wanna know what happens.
Also could you make this Bobby/Jack?! Please!!!!
MORE SOON!
~shadow
Also could you make this Bobby/Jack?! Please!!!!
MORE SOON!
~shadow
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome so far! Cant wait for an update!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love the story, it sounds good so far so MORE SOON and please make the chapters longer!!
~shadow
~shadow
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfil fic so far! Please continue!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a really good start, hope you write more. the character of Jack interested me and I glad someone is writing a story about him.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story sound like going to good i like to read more. are you going to keep updating your story?
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good. I hope you finish it.