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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story! I read it a few weeks ago, but forgot to review. I have been checking back hoping that you would update. I hope that you do so again soon! This has got to be one of my favorite stories on this site so far. Hope to see more!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I spilled ginger ale on my keyboard and all my keys are sticking, so I hope I don't screw this up again! Your spelling and grammar are good, and your subject matter is a great start. The Beauty and the Beast archetypes are perfect for a good romantic, sexy story. I don't suppose you'd be publishing here if you didn't have an interest in the sexual subtext of this fairytale. It's just fantasy, it's anonymous, so have fun with it. I hope you update.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really love this story. I love different tellings of beauty and the beast. Your so far is one of the best. I have been keeping an eye on it for a long time... I was just wondering when you would be adding another chapterto the story. it really REALLY good!!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hrrrm.....not bad....but it doesn't seem as if it fits on a site for adult-geared fan fiction.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I hope you continue with it.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good so far!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm loving this, please update soon I am dying to know what happens
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept, sounds familiar to a myth in the same vein as Beauty and the Beast. I like how you are taking the story. Please continue
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good even thought i think ur mixing in a lot more fairy tales than just beauty and the beast
very entertaining
and i didn't see anything wrong with the last chapter
although when things are good i usually read over mistakes if any were there
very entertaining
and i didn't see anything wrong with the last chapter
although when things are good i usually read over mistakes if any were there
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty cool. ^_^ I'm guessing that you wrote it more in line with the original versions of the fairy tale and it's a lot more interesting than the Disney version (though I am fond of both). It's very well-written and it's nice to see good spelling and grammer. Please continue soon.