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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I ran out of things to say about this chapter but only this: suspenseful cliffy. I can bet Mellisa is going to get the shock of her life when meeting Katrina's "friends".
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ditto what i said on the other fic
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait for more.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh..... Kay... Scar and Lex showing up in this too? Interesting so far...
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!! This is damn good!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay...you got it fixed. Now I just wish you would update faster. I really like this and want to read more. Lots more!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its a good story so far, i like it please continue.
also i may have a simple solution to your problem of posting. give me an email, and i'll send you my HTML cods that i use for this site for my own stories.
also i may have a simple solution to your problem of posting. give me an email, and i'll send you my HTML cods that i use for this site for my own stories.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The concept for the story is great. It's alot like the other one you have, you might want to change a few things. Also, I was a bit confused at times...you kept calling Katrina his niece... Anyway, you might want to do some updating on the story, but it's otherwise very good. Oh, and before I forget, you might also want to make the conversations a little distinguishable. Sometimes I find it hard to tell who is talking. Alright, I leave you alone.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is getting good. Katrina saved by an invisible savior (a predator) from that evil Marcus *throws a rock at him and flees*. I can't wait for the next one. Keep on writing.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH!!! I like it! Can't wait to see more. And don't worry about the problems updating; we will them all the same. Just as long as you continue to update.