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It's a really good story and please try to writhe it to the end.  o(>///w///<)o

I personally don't think that this should be taken off. The plot line is very original and the character development is amazing. Much better than others that I have read on many sites for fanfiction. It would be a shame to see such good work laid to rest.

please finish!!!

i like it alot!

actually its quite interesting... so please dont delete it... perhaps now you might be able to add something to the story ^_^

Please don't delete this one, shortest_warrior! I like the plot and characters; it's a fascinating read. Perhaps it's time to revisit the Predator movies or maybe just not think about it at all. Sometimes, that helps me...but I write and work in weird ways. ^^; Still, just don't delete it, please.

hello ^_^

I just wanted to say that I like you're story, and I think it's fun to read and well written. So pleace don't deleat you're story. Try and get over you're writers block, if that don't happen. What about giving you're story over to someone els to finish??

Love ^_^

Please continue this story!!!!
I love this fanfiction,and you are very good to write!!!
The story line is very interesting and the characters are describe very well!!!!
Please continue......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Pleaseeeeee!!!!!!!

Oh, dude please don't delete this story. Writer's block happens to the best of us, trust me I know, I happen to write all the time and it can get to be really fustrating. Just chill for a while, hang low, maybe watch the Alien, Predator movies, or the AVP movie. Some times watching or doing something that is close related to the subject helps you get back on track. If you ever compose an e-mailing list for this story sign me up, I really like it and it's really going some where. Even if ya just wanna talk about the story or whatever, manybe see you I could talk ya threw this rut, Z~mail me at DigiFox86@yahoo.com. Other then that I really know now what to tell you, beside don't put too much pressure on yourself cause that just makes things worse. It also help to read other stories to get a feel of how you would like to draw out further points and events into your story. Laters

Dude I totally love your story andI can't wait for the continuation, yeah if you ever get a mailing list together, sign me up *wink*.Kudos, dude, great story!

Yay! An update! I want more. I want to see what happens after the mission is over. I can't wait!