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by fortunepill

person mindwave
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This had a lot of potential but I've tried to write and I can see the difficulty of writing. But I think if the story continued it would have been Catherine going to therapy while having dreams of her training and transformation. I would have ended it with Catherine confronting the doll slave persona Stargher created and then the doll would take over the living Catherine's life and trying to find a worthy master.
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a shame that the story is just that short!
Really good job!
person MWkillkenny84
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... good scene...
I have made a tentatives of create (in my mind) the 'process' of Stargher's Chatrine Enslavement...
And you have made a good FF in the same 'zone'.
Vote: 10
I'll hope of an update of the fic...
person fnxmoon2
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOH! I love it! You always wanted to know what he did to her during that time to make her his puppet. MORE!!!!
person Bryan
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice but only one chapter? If you ever plan on adding to this story, please do.
person Rose
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update this was absolutley fabulous it had me reading gasping for breath update soon please.
person Kinky Penguin
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait, was this just a oneshot? Or did you get discouraged by a lack of reviews and stop? Or maybe you just go distracted... Aw, if you did have more planned, I'd love to see it...

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