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well you have managed to smah me again. I truly thought the dream sequence was the real thing. Then that last sentence just kills you. Why can't he just make his drream come true. He could in heartbeat if he just tried.

Well, we never actually heard him give the order, but if Vader has in fact toasted Padme’s family, I’m afraid the only redemption that he is going to find is probably at the end of his son’s lightsaber in about twenty years.

I am not going to get all philosophical this time. My only thought is that someone needs to slap that boy upside his head…really, really hard several times--maybe that would knock some seriously needed sense into that stubborn numskull of his.

I have loved this story from the very first sentence, and I hate the idea that you’re going to have it come to a conclusion. Getting into Vader’s world has been a little like looking at a horrible accident – it is painful to see, but you just can’t turn your eyes away because it’s so compelling. Thank you.

wow...so the part of anakin's redemption was just a day dream? god... i feel so terrible for padme... please write more...

This is a very sad chapter!!! You are doing a great job Chance!!!
Please update soon!!!

It's me again. PLEASE don't come to an end because I wanted to see what Vader is
going to do with Si-Nia, I mean we really didn't read that much about her, but even
though this is about Padme and Vader.

i dont know whether to be happy or sad that you wrote more. i dont want this story the end!! it is really one of the greatest star wars fanfictions i've ever read. it's not fluffy... but dark and shows what i assume would be the true story of anakin and padme. i love it and i'm gonna be sad to see it end. i hope you write many more star wars fanfics after this. much love and merry christmas.. happy holidayss!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!

lol! Well, if I got an Anakin for Christmas...... *raises eyebrows a few times* lol!

Please update soon! Where the hell do you come up with this brillant stuff, huh? I really hope there's a happy ending....anyway, again, please update soon.

~Katie

Hi Chance,

I love how you give us nice glimpses back in time. ...and regarding symbolism, the only thing that stands out is the hand-holding part. I'll be sure to reread this chapter and catch onto more symbolism.

So...is Obi-Wan going to try and free Padme from the cell Vader's put her in? I'm trying to imagine future chapters that have Padme stuck in a cell...and it gets kind of boring. Your imagination is cool though, you'll certainly think of something.

I'm now free from college (till late January), so I'll be checking in more frequently. I hope you update again soon.

- Rachel

Anakin's departure (the cloak, leaving Padme for a more darkened area) = SYMBOLISM . Yay me. ...I see it. (Note - I'm feeling giddy). :)

- Rachel