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Go to hell Obi wan!
I love Vader and I love your fiction!

At first I thought he killed Padme, but thank God he didn't. You're doing a great job!!!
Please update soon!!!

Wow! That was a very powerful chapter. You did an excellent job of conveying what it was like to be Padme at that moment – the sense of fear was gripping.

I had started to think after I wrote my last review that perhaps Padme was not truly dead when she fell onto the floor at the end of the previous chapter. It really would not have been enough for Vader to kill her outright like that. She wounded him to his rotten, evil core when he heard her say that she had to kill him, and he his too much of a sadist to be satisfied with ending her life cleanly. It is more in keeping with the consistency of his character for him to slowly tear her down, or as he tells her “shatter you from the inside.” Vader wants her to suffer because he is the living embodiment of the old adage, “Misery loves company.”

Thanks for a terrific update.

Poor Padme and Si-Nia. What is to become of both of them, not to mention Obi-Wan? Lord Vader deserves everything that is coming to him. He is truly beyond redemption, it's a good thing that his mother did not live to see her son become such an evil monster. I bet she is truly spinning in her grave. Anyway, wonderful addition to an absolutely awesome story.

Boy does life seem depressing for Padme. I hope something changes to turn that around (and thank goodness she's not dead!). I wish we could redeem Anakin a little and make him less brutal.

lol. Can't wait to read more.

- Rachel

wow... this chapter made me hate vader... where the hell is obi-wan?

YOU ROCK CHANCE!!! I will keep supporting you all the way!!!

Yeah! You posted the deleted chapters again!

Please post your next chapter soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

You already know I adore this story . . . but I'm sure you won't get sick of hearing it!!! I'm so happy you're able to continue this, and it was worth the wait, I'm incredibly anxious to see what the next chapter holds! I'm sure it'll be full of angst and tears, but I find myself wondering if anyone's going to have a happy ending at the close of this story . . .

I'll wait 'n see!

Perfect. Please write more!