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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was great. it's getting better and better. Please update soon@!!
I like the interactions with her and maha'vin
I like the interactions with her and maha'vin
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!!!! At first I thought it would probably belong on the fanfiction site but not anymore!
Update soon .,....
Update soon .,....
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I laughed the whole way through. I just love a good action/romance story with a sense of humor. I can't wait for more!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That was awesome! Update quicker!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Maha'vin sounds intresting!!! I'm curious what will happen next. Update soon! I like the way you made up the names.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I want more! I soo cannot wait to see what happens next. And to see who gets to her first?! Please update soon. Oh, btw, there are a few spelling errors. (I am not sure if you care, just little things that I noticed.) ;)
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shaky start, but getting better. Heh. Hooray for splattery!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I already said this is good! Don't stop keep it up please!!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok...there has been more promised. I am interested to see where this goes. I hope you update soon.