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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh my goddd!!! this is sooo good....i cant wait for more!!! please....take us out of our misery and update soon!!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome and you did a great job bringing the characters alive. I can't wait to see what will happen between Kayla and Maha'vin. Please update soon!!!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UH OH!!! What is going to happen next? Man, I really loathe cliffhangers. And yet so many writers employ them. All I can say is hurry up and update. I am gnawing on my fingernails in antisipation.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, emotional ending for chapter 7. Worth the wait!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i see chemistry between Kul'vir and Kayla.... maybe its me
I liked Kul'vir's 'death' talk to her
update soon it's really good
I liked Kul'vir's 'death' talk to her
update soon it's really good
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really good. Fav chapter so far! Read it twice.
please update soon
please update soon
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like this please keep going
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Girl...you sure know how to write. I got shivers. I can't wait for the next update. (My apologies if you are a man. :) )
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. what a steamy chapter!
Hope to see more 'mating' rituals (he, he)
Hope to see more 'mating' rituals (he, he)
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much keep it up!