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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Keep going.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I care Lorna! I love feedback :)
Yes, I went a little beside myself with the erotic section (he he)
Yes, I went a little beside myself with the erotic section (he he)
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh wow the tension escalates...this is such an awesome story!!!! more more more!!!!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how nice. :) Ga'gan is not mad. I am sooo happy! I really love this fic and can't wait for the next update. It really is one of my top favorites. I just love the way you write. Keep it up!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got one word for ya EROTIC huh? HUH? What do ya think. NOW that i have more time i will be reveiwing regularly. Not that you care but hey feedback helps Keep writing
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Kal, must be hard for him since he loves Kayla
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked the new chapter. Can't wait for more.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is way cool. No worries. You don't have to be a english major to write such good stuff! Though I think the word (numerous) is a tad harsh :?/
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Despite the numerous grammatical and spelling errors, this story is AWESOME!!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Now I'm dying to know 'who's da daddy' :)
Can't wait for another update. This is really good. I love the drama.
Can't wait for another update. This is really good. I love the drama.