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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when come's the next chapter?
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story. I like it alot. I hope to see another chapter. ;)
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue with the story!! you left me hangin! lol its great so far
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is good. The only thing I see wrong with it is that you occasionally switch from first-person perspective to third-person perspective. Stick with one, because it's hard to read a story that has 'me' and 'I' to 'she' and 'her'. I'd like to see more though. I'm liking Oni, she's a cool demoness.
BTW, thanks for reviewing my story. It's in the (very slow) progress of being updated. Once I complete Chapter 7, eight will also be ready to post. (Two in one. Yay!) Hope to see Chapter 2, soon.
WaterLily
BTW, thanks for reviewing my story. It's in the (very slow) progress of being updated. Once I complete Chapter 7, eight will also be ready to post. (Two in one. Yay!) Hope to see Chapter 2, soon.
WaterLily