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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked your first chapter! It was well written with hardly any mistakes!! I hope to read lots more soon! ^__~
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well where's the rest of it. Please update soon.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, I enjoyed your first chapter. I hope you can write more soon. Also, I like mary sues just fine.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this very much. Even if this is a mary sue it is very good. Can't wait to read the rest.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One more thing. Not really a review. This is for all who write about this. Don't you ever wonder if David Bowie reads any of this stuff about him?
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop there. You are doing great.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! I like the first person action and I must admit... your wirting style is very different. I have never read a story that wasn't about Sarah and Jareth, and I guess who's to say its not, right? *smiles* I look foward to the next chapter and even if I am the only one who reveiws... you can keep going for me. And I like the Jareth comments at the end... but I have to ask something. If Jareth was really in your room talking to you, would you really only be talking?? *grins* I don't think I would.
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