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for The Lost and The Lonely

by Aewnaur

schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*flails* Guh, I'd forgotten half of this! So nice that it's back again. ^-^

Ooh, Sarah is back in the Underground! I wonder what effect that will have. Zekiel and Jareth should be able to tell she is there, Jareth especially. Because for all of Hoggles good intentions, I don't think he can keep Sarah away from what is happening. And she might just decide to do something about it.

Thanks for letting me know you updated! I'll be checking next year for an update. ^-^

Happy Christmas!
person CiraArana
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you planning to update this fic ever again? I really, really hope you will. It was one of my favourites ...
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When. Are. You. Going. To. Update. This??? I check every week when I go online, and every time I'm disappointed. *sighs* I try to be patient, but sometimes I just don't want to -- and right now I don't! So, UPDATE!!!!!
person Kat
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only have one nitpicky thing to say: please try to have someone beta your story so that little mistakes like "innocents," which should be "innocence" and "cloths" which should be "clothes" don't take away from the overall experience of the story. Other than that, I really like what you have started. The Peach Dream is such a beautiful part of the movie, it is nice to see people elaborating on it, and in a very sexy way I might add. Kudos to you. Please write more soon!
person pixsterz
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant, i really like this story, any more chapters?
person Wilder
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is SO good!! gah, i can't wait for you to update. this just makes the characters and the movie that much better!! you are an awesome writer and your ideas are amazing!! Koodos!
person CiraArana
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's back, it's back, HURRAY!
person arava
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... Interesting. I wonder how long it will take for the memories to break free for Sarah. And if Jareth will realize that Sarah is in fact calling on someone from his world. Will Hoggle even mention the fact that the Labyrinth is falling apart?
Many questions. Good Job. Update soon. :)
person Kat
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. Can't wait to read more!
person Cass
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had loved this story when it was on ff.net and I had wondered what happened to it, so please continue with it.

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