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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've presented a very good writing style, and I like how you managed to make it exciting from the beginning to the end. However, I'm still kind of trying to figure out how Marv managed to survive electrocution :/ ...but then again he's a surprisingly tough guy.
Nevertheless, I'm delighted how you managed to still keep the environment dark and with a concrete-hard edge, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your updates ^^.
Nevertheless, I'm delighted how you managed to still keep the environment dark and with a concrete-hard edge, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your updates ^^.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey please updatew I really wanna read more
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just finish reading your story, and all i can say is wow. I like your style and would love to read more about eerin. She is an excellent original caracter. please write more.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!! I love stories about Marv since he is my favorite character and nobody seems to enjoy writing about him. Thanks
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like where the story is going because it's different. It's very good and I hope to read more from you soon. Keep up the writing!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The bird-lady is kind of twisted, I like her. Marv surviving being electrocuted several times is pretty weird, but it's no more unrealistic than Miho's being able to fly in the movie.