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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhanger at the end of chapter 21!
more please soon
more please soon
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 17: hacks off the rapists dick
Read everything in one sitting - WOW!
Oh the things I wanna do to Dame Vaako...
more please
Read everything in one sitting - WOW!
Oh the things I wanna do to Dame Vaako...
more please
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far, it's very good :D
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More more more.. i love her.. i can't wait to see more of her interactions with riddick.. and i love the fact that she is loyal to riddick without really much of a reason shown so far.. and the vision.. she is getting more and more mysterious.. i love it.. down with dame vaako.. hiss hiss.. lol.. hehe..
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee hee I love it when someone thwarts dame vakko
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really like the turn this has taken- looking forward to more.
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<<;...This is the same Biokinetic from earlier, and Im liking this story as much as I liked your other one. I LOVE Kylie, such a wonderful non mary-sue character. I'm kinda anxious to see the next chapter because this almost seems like the end of the story...btw thanks for the feedback on my story, I hope you update soon^^