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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What will the morning bring? Hopefully another chapter to this story! I liked it a lot - who wouldn't? Gail and Miho are incredibly sexy, both in their own different ways which you pointed out in your story. I hope you've received enough encouraging feedback for your writing and therefore keep at it.
Well done!
Well done!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Please continue it.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I can understand why you're fascinated with Sin City - there are a lot of really gorgeous girls in that movie... :-)
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post the next chapter to this fic as soon as you're able to
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far please update soon!!! i love the way she thinks and the dialogue is great, keep up the good work!!!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!!!!!
I loved Sin City and the story line with Becky and Miho was my favorite! I'm glad that you're writing a story about them.
Please, please, please continue!!
I loved Sin City and the story line with Becky and Miho was my favorite! I'm glad that you're writing a story about them.
Please, please, please continue!!
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more, please update as soon as you are able to
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. I can't wait to read more.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done and I can't wait to read more. I think I may have a soft spot for Sin City femmeslash.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, sexy, but holding off on the sex, nicely done.