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for Practical Punishment

by poisondoll

person kat f.
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was...fantastic! I'd die to read a sequel! Pleeaasseee!! Sequel!
person Yaoi_guy6739
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good. Pretty hot, but a little more detail couldn't hurt. I agree with Prima Donna, Ben and Jhonny > Thing and Jhonny. But overall, pretty decent.
person ...
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes
person WillowRose
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...it was a tad sadistic.But a well written sadistic.I liked it. :)
person Rei Nohara
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, that was MEAN! Poor Johnny, but... yeah I guess he deserved it. I would have enjoyed a bit of Reed there, but it was fine anyway. One more thing, again: poor Johnny!
person s_d
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor poor poor johnny,bless him THING IS EVIL AND MUST DIE! plz do another chapter i think it will be better than just a one-shot and if u do decide to do another chapter plz do it soon! ^_^
person baby sweet
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so....i dunno but poor johnny i felt so sorry for him, i mean come on thing is like a .....big...man..thing wateva ^_^ u must continue or ill kill myself!i mean thing could blackmail johnny into doing it alot so the tape doesnt come out and johnny becomes ill and depressed and 1 of the others notices and try an help him...ok ill shut up now...but great chapter so PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!
person Prima Donna
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good, but I prefer Ben and Johnny together consensually. But hey, maybe that's just me. But it was good
person Mae
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no poor Johnny! Are you gonna find him a significant other to make him feel better? Who'll kick the Things ass?
person Mahou
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic, and congrats for being the first Jonny/Thing fic.

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