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oh my god. please update soon. very very very soon pleeeeeaaaaaase!!!!! This is the hottest piece of slash i've read in.. like.. ever!!!! Just the right mix of kindness and kinkiness :) You're a great great writer. Update please!!

i like this so much i want to sing the McDonalds theme song. in fact i think i will! hold on a sec...
ok im done.
as for updates all i have to say is, "you fucking bitch..."
what the hell was that! your just damn lucky i lke this story so much or i'd show you some SM, but without the M!
I agree, your characters are perfectt and i even liked the D/C scene which is saying something because nearly NOBODY can pair those two the way i like it, but that was cool. loving the mental image. and Bruce's reaction was great!
The bit with the kiddie clothes was awsome. lets make Crane seem like even more of a abused sex kitten that wants it sooo bad...im gonna stop now.
and what's the deal with bruce's and crane's da's. what where they lovers as well? did they molest litle Crane?(...'little crane'?...) what's the deal!?...
Vale!

PS: 'RL sucks'?...ok, im having a dumb moment. What is this 'RL' you speak of?

Oh, I'm gonna plead desperately for Crane in the handcuffs.... *drops to knees and begs* And some more crazy Scarecrowness wouldn't go amiss either, hint, hint. I love this story so much!

I love your story! I am so happy you finally updated! Your Bruce, and Crane, are right on target. I can't wait to see some more Dom!Bruce, please keep updating!

-april

yay! kinky sink sex! damn u crane! why did u pass up the chance for kinky sink sex?! sigh, update soon as there is way to litle crane/bruce smut, and this isreally good smut!

Oh, my, I am seriously loving this...please let there be more than just these three chapters!

I love how you get Bruce's dark side so perfectly meshed with Crane's, and I thought it was great when you mentioned Harley Quinn )_^

--Allie B.

ooooh....now she's teasing us. thats no fair. how long you gonna make us wait for an update? Hurry up damnit!!! I wanna know what happens!!!!

Ooooo. I'm so glad I found this again. =D
This fanfiction is just getting better and better. While the pairing would not be considered 'canon' by any terms nor means, you seem to bloody well make it so. As last time, *excellent* characterization. <3
PLEASE continue this. If I have to bake you cookies everyday and buy you a Crane lushie, that I will do. ^.^
~Rei

There's something about Crane that screams for some sadistic domination, definitely. The spoiler for the next chapter is just too much of a tease! I love the idea of Batman getting all jealous and possessive.

*clears throat* Wow. I eagerly await more... I love the way you portray Crane's mind- jumping from desire to insanity to anger. Very great. Love it.